Jane was walking back from school and a little girl came along and said hello. Jane said Go Away! The little girl ran away. When Jane got home Jane yelled out Mum and Dad I'm home. Her Mum and Dad came running. Her Mum said have you had a good day? Yes I got everything right. Wow, that is excellent. Yes, Mum exactly, and soon I'll be in high school. Wow that's wonderful her Mum exclaimed. Well, I'll do my home work. Yes, said her Mum. But, instead she sneaked out and bought some chocolates. When the teacher found out he was furious but when her mum and dad found out, they were not.

Any way I am going a bit forward. Well, she had chocolate brown hair, and brown eyes and a most unpleasant smirk. One day she saw a door in the grass but didn't go into it...

(the story isn't finished yet)